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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2008 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good first fic, you should continue writing. Maybe you could continue this, see what Pam thinks of the house, unless you want to stick to cannon :)

Author's Response: Do you know how much I would love to write a series and finish it?! I'm the laziest person ever. lol. rnrnThanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: lpy4704 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was sweet story. I liked the end because it was very cute, but still held that sadness Jim had while missing her. Good job!

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