8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 04:09 pm Title: Message in a Bottle
Kevin is so funny. Great chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 11:40 am Title: Message in a Bottle
I loved the way you worked Roy's mug shot in there and gave the reunion as the backstory for it. So perfect! And Kevin and groupies, priceless!
Author's Response: Kevin and groupies - they seem to go hand in hand.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 08:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Nice start. Your Kevin voice is frighteningly accurate!
Author's Response: Haha! For the sake of the story, I'll take that as a compliment.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 08:04 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Yay! I love this! Now all you need is a Zebra, some salsa, and a waterfall. Can't wait to see them.
Author's Response: They're on their way.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 07:27 am Title: Message in a Bottle
"Groupies! Hehe" - perfect last line for Kevin! Cool idea, can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 06:57 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Oh, this is a GREAT story! Love it so far. Glad that Kevin's band got a gig afterall! Can't wait to read more!
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 06:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle
This is a very good idea! I am looking forward to reading more of it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 05:15 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Wow, you really tapped into Kevin's head and that's impressive and scary. So funny. Loved the way you worked in bits of the story too - Roy's DUI mug shot, the wedding that wasn't, Kevin's infantile fantasy about the infamous kiss (as reported by Kelly - perfect!) What a treat!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, Colette!