Date: January 27, 2009 05:36 pm Title: A Run and A Phone Call
Aww, MA, I loved how they were sort of talking about themselves when they were discussing Carol being put on the spot by Michael. Nice job with that.
Can't wait to see your alternate ending to this saga.
Author's Response: I always liked the parallels the writers often made between Jim and Pam's relationship and those of many other characters. It was my little homage. I've posted the last chapter. Hope you enjoy it! :)
Date: January 27, 2009 02:13 pm Title: A Run and A Phone Call
The missing text messages of Pam's has always been a part of their story that has interested me so much. I think you have done such a wonderful job of conveying both their feelings of sadness, apprehensiveness with a little bit of hope.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was one point that I was frustrated the writers left dangling so I had to play with it.TWSS. ;)
Date: January 27, 2009 12:37 pm Title: A Run and A Phone Call
Well, yes, it needs another part! You can't leave us hanging! This is a very cute AU- shouldn't it have been this easy, this painless, this Karen-free?!
Author's Response: I took pity on the readers by finishing up the story a bit more and keeping Karen to a minimum. ;) Hope you enjoy the ending. :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2009 06:42 am Title: A Run and A Phone Call
Perfectly willing to suspend belief for you, MA :) What a sweet chapter and to think there will be more!!!
This little bit of dialogue...
“Still, what a way to have your heart crushed. That’s gotta be hard to recover from.”
So there it is. The elephant in the room. He hears her take a deep breath.
“Well, you know… Poor Carol too. What a position to be in. I don’t think she meant to hurt or humiliate him.”
...is so perfect, so true to voice. Patiently awaiting more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I always worry about trying to be true to the characters. I'm glad to hear it worked for you. :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2009 11:07 pm Title: A Run and A Phone Call
I'm really liking it so far. Can't wait for them to meet up and talk :)
Author's Response: Thank you!