Date: May 30, 2008 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... okay, probably the best sex scene I've ever read... seriously... okay, now how in the world am I supposed to get back to work after that? You need to write a second chapter... a written equivalent of a cold shower for those of us who read steamy stories on our work breaks... lol ;) Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, I've written plenty of cold showers. They're filed under ANGST. :D Thanks, Lynzee005!
Date: January 12, 2007 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
That was fantastic! You're such a good author! I usually don't like oneshots, but I've been going thru yours, and they were really worth a try. Especially now with Karen in the picture I need to see Jim hot for Pam. Your Jim is so JIM and so hot. Like John Krasinski shirtless, presumably;-) Anyway, great job! As is FABULOUS great job.
Author's Response: Am I the only one who doesn't want to see JK shirtless? I think he's kinda skinny. But Jim's another story. He could be hiding a nice fictional bod under those fictional work clothes. Yay for fantasy. Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying the fics ;)
Date: January 06, 2007 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1
He pulled her wrists behind her, and held them there with one hand. With his other, he drew the backs of his fingers along the underside of a breast. She moaned, arching her back. When his mouth covered her nipple, hot, wet, she cried out, and her knees buckled.
That? is one of the sexiest passages I have EVER read. You're amazing, shan. Really amazing.
…taking him all in.
Oh hell yes. Great callback to Casino Night.
hoped he was ready, because she couldn’t outrun it
Love this, every line. I really wish I could see it onscreen. *sigh*
Author's Response: See it onscreen? You and me, both, sister! Thanks for reviewing again - and thanks for the specifics (it's helpful, yeah?)!
Date: October 17, 2006 02:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, just discovered this. Holy hotness.....
Author's Response: Gotta love the stealth smut. Glad you liked it, Lisahoo! ;)
Date: August 16, 2006 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh - nice!
That was awesome - hot and in character and I loved the teasing even in the smut.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: July 18, 2006 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Whew. Blushing. Goosebumps. Heavens to Mergatroid!!
That is without a doubt the hottest thing I have ever read. Not that I make a habit of reading such things...*cough*
Now I am really looking forward to having my husband all to myself this weekend (sans kiddos) Thanks, Shan! You really do rock.
Author's Response: Thanks, MrsKamorri! Have a great weekend *wink* :)
Date: July 14, 2006 02:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I love you.
Author's Response: woo hoo! LOL thanks!
Date: July 13, 2006 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
going to splash water on my face now...
Author's Response: Hope that's good :)
Date: July 12, 2006 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was just...
I don't even...
I'll come back later when I've cooled down a little. *fans self*
Author's Response: Thanks - and when are you going to move "Laugh This Life With Me" over here - people will lose their shit :)
Date: July 12, 2006 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
…taking him all in.
this line nearly had me in hysteric giggles. i know it probably wasn't supposed to, but amongst all the tense-ness of the scene, there it was. hehe. but yea, holy hot.
Author's Response: Oops! Hope it didn't detract!
Author's Response: You know, when she said that Casino Night, I looked around at thought, Did that sound hot to anyone else?!