10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2009 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
"Because I can recognize your steps coming toward me with my eyes closed, and I'm sure the carpet could, too."
^^AMAZING!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful, beautiful story. So many great lines, especially:
"My face worked to get that out, and my eyes watched it move in the air, until you caught it."
Date: February 13, 2009 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely job, as always, yanana.
Date: February 13, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is super pretty.
I didn't think I'd like it, but I doooooo (:
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another brillaint piece. hats off to you yanana. It's not often first person fic's come off this well. I wish CN had ended like this :P
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 10:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely lovely. There something about the imagery you use, the way "his" brain casts around for just the right image even if it isn't obvious, that is just very skillfully done. You capture the heartbreak and the stillness of the 27 seconds perfectly, and the tension of the casino night as well. And if I like Pam's reaction here better? Well, I'm weak, what can I say? Too many beautiful lines to quote, but this one will linger with me, because it feels like life itself: I love you more than anything, and I know you very well, but I know there are things in that kiss that you're telling me that I won't pick up on tonight, but you'll tell me everything later.
Date: February 13, 2009 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel the same way about season 2 and 3. Even though I know what's happening with them now, I just love to torture myself and revisit this old Jim and Pam. Great job writing this, I absolutely loved this.