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Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2009 06:14 pm Title: No Life Ain't Always Beautiful, But it's a Beautiful Ride.

Great chapter. I love that we jumped ahead and see Jim still healthy and them with a family. I also like that he finally recognized he needs to be strong for them too. Poor Pam.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2009 08:35 pm Title: No Life Ain't Always Beautiful, But it's a Beautiful Ride.

oh my goodness, this is the first chapter i've read in about 3 weeks because of the malware content, and what a great chapter this was! at first i thought i had missed a chapter while i'd been away from the sight then i realized that you had jumped ahead a few years. although that had been a little confusing to me at first i think taking a leap through the story was a good thing - because this story is about the medical issues that jim had because of his heart defect, therefore having them go through that with their son luke (btw, great name, i love it!) was a great idea. i can't wait to see how you will continue, and sadly i think this will be drawing nearer to a conclusion. great chapter!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2009 07:38 pm Title: No Life Ain't Always Beautiful, But it's a Beautiful Ride.

Cute :) My only complaint is that the babies eyes would be blue if he'd just been born hee :)

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