Date: April 12, 2009 10:09 pm Title: Pam
After having talked about this one I went to read it again and I realized I hadn't left a review and I thought I had. I really like these, and I would love to see what you could do for Karen's POV and Roy's too, I think they would all be interesting perspectives of the exact same event. Granted, theirs may be a lot less intense, but you know, it would fit well with these two. Of course, you have to finish Firsts and Soc 101 first :):):)
Date: February 24, 2009 03:35 pm Title: Pam
The juxtaposition of this:
She's singing about how every little thing she does is magic, and you're willing to bet that every thing she does just turns Jim on.
Karen has run up to the stage and is singing another wildly appropriate song, one about how every little thing Pam does is magic and how you know your love for her will go on.
is awesome. Really. I love how this is written. You captured what I *pray* they were both definitely thinking at that very moment. I loved it :) Kudos!
Date: February 16, 2009 03:29 pm Title: Jim
Hello! (knocks on computer monitor) I'm out here reading and enjoying your work - and I agree that you should continue on with Pam and Karen's POV, too.
I loved this look at what Jim was thinking and feeling, especially:
"The worst part of it was that she knows. At least, you hope she does. You think she does. You'd be devastated if she didn't." and
"Karen has run up to the stage and is singing another wildly appropriate song, one about how every little thing Pam does is magic and how you know your love for her will go on."