10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2010 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I just started reading the reviews from other people, and I just want to say ditto to all of that. The yogurt lid was the most brilliant idea ever and I loved how Pam was amazed over the box, how Jim presented it to her and the letter. It is so hard to write letters that sound realistic (trust me, my Mistletoe story was really hard when it came to the inner monologue stuff - it's so hard to make things ring true!), and then walking up to him in the office. And that's just chapter two! Chapter one (which I was so frustrated at and needed to go read chapter two to try and find something happier, which definitely happened) was just heartbreaking. The anger that they were expressing to one another, either through verbal or nonverbal communication was just incredibly descriptive and really helped set the stage for the later parts of the story. Keep going! And I can't believe I forgot to say all of this before! THIS IS INCREDIBLE! (P.S. I'm so glad that you're trying out a brand new idea with this mix up of possibilities from the show. I always love reading authors fresh ideas or combinations of parts and when they can execute the story well - like you're certainly doing, no worries at all! - then it's just like drinking a delicious mango smoothie. Fantastic story and I'll be quite now so you can write some more!
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2010 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh this going to be good, love the tension and Pam's last little speech:)
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2010 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This better be a freaking series, I love it. I loved the awkwardness between them. This sort of angst is my favourite omg. He's not with Karen... then they have to become friends again and she has to woo him backkkkk!!!!
DO IT :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2010 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I think I felt my heart break. I know Jim is just protecting himself, but it still hurts.
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am really digging this story! You've got a great idea and I can't way to see it flesh out. How long is Jim gonna hold out? I guess it's sick, but I kind of like Angry!Jim...
Author's Response: Thank you! I think it's less how long Jim can hold out and more how long I can hold out. I'm already getting impatient and wanting them together! But then another part of me wants to switch things up and throw myself into the story as Jim's new girlfriend.... I guess we'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reading!