Reviews For Four What Ifs
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2009 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

These were four cool little stories. Each one different, but all enjoyable. Funny and serious :) good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed them :)

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2009 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Those last ones are all so sad...but I like to think about what would happen if things didn't happen the way that they...happened. Great job, keep it up!

Author's Response: I know, it makes me thankful that the writers on the show steer clear of what ifs like this. Thanks for the encouragement, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2009 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked "Insecurity Insurance" - what a cute name for an insurance company.  I felt so sad for Pam in the others, especially the last one. Sniff.

Author's Response: I'm glad someone got that joke :) Yeah, I've I guess Pam took a beating, didn't she? Even though I intended the last one to be ambiguous, I'd like to believe that Pam and Jim had a nice life together before they passed away. I guess I owe Pam (and everyone else) a nice fluff piece.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2009 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was gorgeous. I loved the way you ended. Great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, it means a lot :)

Reviewer: elliehalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2009 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah, my heart. Why couldn't one have been happy?!
No, I kid. I think these are perfect. Though sad, the last ends in a bittersweet, hopeful tone.
Poor Bandit. He would have been saved, if only Jam had existed. See how necessary they are to the world? This just proves my point. My family may no longer call me a lunatic, thank you.
(Okay, maybe they still can.)

Author's Response: See, I think Jam is necessary too, I mean, what else would I eat with my peanut better? (OK, feel free to groan at the really bad joke.) But seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2009 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

awws, quite interesting (:

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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