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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2009 07:30 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

I don't know how I missed this second chapter!  So sad and angsty, any chance of a third chapter to wrap things up with a happy ending??

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 11:23 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

Oh you have to finish this! You can't leave it like this! Great so far though :)

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 05:47 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

Argh. That was sad. And I'm such a sap that I want you to write another chapter where she decides to call him or something. I can't help it.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 02:36 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

You're tearing my heart out, here! You MUST write another chapter! Please! I'm begging you!

By the way, I love that Katie offered him to wrap his arm around her to make Pam think they were together. Obviously, it worked! Also, I love the detail at the end that Jim couldn't sleep on her side of the bed still. I would love to see this turn into a WIP, flashbacking to the reason why Pam left him and filling in the blanks.

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