1 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2019 04:37 am Title: Uneased
I never thought about this: "But there was also that slim chance that if he would have just kept his mouth shut, he could be with Pam right now." Interesting thought and sooo off the mark.
Thabks for writing this. I'm enjoying every word!
1 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2017 09:26 am Title: Ashamed of Being Broken
The to be continued at the end of this mocks me. I love the portrait of their two characters in the gentle au situation. I just wish there were more.
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2012 06:23 pm Title: Ashamed of Being Broken
I really enjoyed these chapters and I hope you continue this soon! Great idea here and so far well executed. I'm hoping you'll have more Jim and Pam interaction coming soon. I like how you've taken moments in season three and believably incorporated Jim in Scranton into them. More soon I hope!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2012 05:42 am Title: Ashamed of Being Broken
YES! So so so so so SO happy that you decided to come back and finish this. I cannot wait to see what you have planned. Welcome back :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really really appreciate it :D
8 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2009 02:29 pm Title: Lay It Down
"That night, I let everything out. I told you how I felt. I told you that I was in love with you. You rejected me. Tell me what part of that scenario warrants a courtesy call to let you know I was transferring because you broke my heart.”
“Yeah, you’re right. We were friends. And I told you I was done with being just friends.”
Wow. What great lines. And Pam just breaks his heart again with "I didn't call of my wedding because of you".
Very powerful and moving chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your review was very nice!
Date: July 13, 2009 09:05 am Title: All That's Within You
This hurt :( You did such a good job of adding Jim to these scenarios where he had been previously missing. You made me feel his sadness and confusion. On a silly note, I kept thinking of that deleted scene with Creed re the bird funeral...lol. That was a nice little break in my Jim misery or would that be JiMisery? ; )
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words! I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 05:55 am Title: All That's Within You
So much to love in this chapter. First, I love conflicted Jim, and his inner thoughts and jumbled feelings were spot on. Second, I was so happy that Pam asked for help making the bird coffin. Jim's reaction to each brush of her fingers was spine tingling. I hope that we get to see some of this unspoken awareness from Pam. I like how Pam is fining more and more courage to be straight forward with Jim and letting him know that he is important to her. I can't wait to see where you take us next!
Author's Response: Thanks hon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2009 11:33 pm Title: All That's Within You
There is so much about this story that I adore and this chapter was AMAZING. I love how stuff that went on while Jim was at Stamford is happening while he's there, and it's all kinds of awkward. The whole bird funeral thing with Jim helping was AMAZING - “Are those the bird coffins?” that line was SO Jim, it was perfect!!!!
I cannot wait to see where you take this, I'm officially hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks babes! Means much!
Date: June 26, 2009 02:12 pm Title: Lay It Down
agh. i can literally feel jim's frustration. update asap
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2009 01:56 pm Title: Lay It Down
Of course, you already have most of my comments on this chapter, but just let me say that I love how raw and honest they were with each other up on the roof. I could feel their pain and confusion palpably. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much as usual!
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2009 08:10 am Title: Lay It Down
Wow!! That was intense, but really well written. I just hope it isn't too much longer until we get to see Jim and Pam together...the tension is killing me...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hopefully things work out to your liking very soon!
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2009 10:44 pm Title: Lay It Down
Okay woah. I am sooooo excited you are continuing this. That chapter was awesome, omg poor Jim and Pam and all the awkwardness :( They need to fix it :(
Continue this like now please!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I love writing the awkwardness but I love getting them back together, so... hee.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2009 10:00 pm Title: Uneased
Really terrific; can't wait to see what comes next!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I appreciate it!
Date: April 27, 2009 09:18 pm Title: Uneased
Congrats on your first story here - and what an intriguing one it is! I like this take on Casino Night, very promising. I'm anxious to read more (hint, hint!)
Author's Response: More is coming soon, I promise! And thanks so much for your review :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2009 08:50 pm Title: Uneased
I loved it. I really felt for both Jim and Pam here. Please update this soon.
Author's Response: Absolutely I will! Thank you so much for reading and telling me what you think!
Date: March 28, 2009 07:42 pm Title: Uneased
So glad you finally decided to write this! It was absolute perfection, just like I expected. :D Definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am so glad you liked it.
Date: March 28, 2009 02:54 pm Title: Uneased
This looks awesome! I love how you made Michael - in his perfectly oblivious way - give away the secret about Pam calling off the engagement. I'm so excited to see you continue this!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm honored that you liked that part, Michael's voice was stuck in my head for awhile with this fic, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Date: March 28, 2009 09:58 am Title: Uneased
Excited to see where this is going! Great idea.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate the time you took to review and read!
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2009 08:23 am Title: Uneased
So good! This is a great spin off of Casino Night. I loved the Michael-Dwight interaction. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: March 28, 2009 07:54 am Title: Uneased
I really like this idea. Casino Night-like angst is really my favorite. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2009 07:32 am Title: Uneased
Excellent job! I'm still cracking up over Dwight's interrogation. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your help and for reading :) Dwight is totally awesome to write.
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2009 05:55 am Title: Uneased
Woot! I'm so glad you finally posted it. Great start! I'm definitely looking forward to more. Thanks so much for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for your help and thanks for reading :)