8 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2009 02:29 pm Title: Lay It Down
"That night, I let everything out. I told you how I felt. I told you that I was in love with you. You rejected me. Tell me what part of that scenario warrants a courtesy call to let you know I was transferring because you broke my heart.”
“Yeah, you’re right. We were friends. And I told you I was done with being just friends.”
Wow. What great lines. And Pam just breaks his heart again with "I didn't call of my wedding because of you".
Very powerful and moving chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your review was very nice!
Date: June 26, 2009 02:12 pm Title: Lay It Down
agh. i can literally feel jim's frustration. update asap
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2009 01:56 pm Title: Lay It Down
Of course, you already have most of my comments on this chapter, but just let me say that I love how raw and honest they were with each other up on the roof. I could feel their pain and confusion palpably. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much as usual!
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2009 08:10 am Title: Lay It Down
Wow!! That was intense, but really well written. I just hope it isn't too much longer until we get to see Jim and Pam together...the tension is killing me...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hopefully things work out to your liking very soon!
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2009 10:44 pm Title: Lay It Down
Okay woah. I am sooooo excited you are continuing this. That chapter was awesome, omg poor Jim and Pam and all the awkwardness :( They need to fix it :(
Continue this like now please!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I love writing the awkwardness but I love getting them back together, so... hee.