Date: July 13, 2009 09:05 am Title: All That's Within You
This hurt :( You did such a good job of adding Jim to these scenarios where he had been previously missing. You made me feel his sadness and confusion. On a silly note, I kept thinking of that deleted scene with Creed re the bird funeral...lol. That was a nice little break in my Jim misery or would that be JiMisery? ; )
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words! I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 05:55 am Title: All That's Within You
So much to love in this chapter. First, I love conflicted Jim, and his inner thoughts and jumbled feelings were spot on. Second, I was so happy that Pam asked for help making the bird coffin. Jim's reaction to each brush of her fingers was spine tingling. I hope that we get to see some of this unspoken awareness from Pam. I like how Pam is fining more and more courage to be straight forward with Jim and letting him know that he is important to her. I can't wait to see where you take us next!
Author's Response: Thanks hon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2009 11:33 pm Title: All That's Within You
There is so much about this story that I adore and this chapter was AMAZING. I love how stuff that went on while Jim was at Stamford is happening while he's there, and it's all kinds of awkward. The whole bird funeral thing with Jim helping was AMAZING - “Are those the bird coffins?” that line was SO Jim, it was perfect!!!!
I cannot wait to see where you take this, I'm officially hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks babes! Means much!