Date: March 13, 2007 12:33 am Title: Words
Absolutely lovely - as the story progresses, I get more and more optimistic, and at the end? Plans of leaving Roy, because she's with Jim [the best man she's ever known] and this line: Sometimes, when no one else is around, Jim likes to hold her and trace the words on her skin with his fingertips and sing the lyrics back to her.
Unbelievably fantastic. I love the idea, the story, Jim is a man of words, proving in more ways that one that they are meant to be with each other. Poetic, lovely prose, and possibly one of my favourite stories here on MTT.
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2006 09:29 am Title: Words
This is a really intriguing idea. Fantastic. And...
Sometimes, when no one else is around, Jim likes to hold her and trace the words on her skin with his fingertips and sing the lyrics back to her.
Yes, please. :)
Date: October 03, 2006 07:17 pm Title: Words
Like your smile
And your fingertips
Like the way that you move your hips.
I like the cool way you look at me,
Everything about you is bringing me
Misery.
Bob is beautiful :]]
I like this story very much thank you
8 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 07:01 pm Title: Words
Your joy at writing this is evident in every line. Very nicely done, and a lovely take on the secret Pam who must exist somewhere.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 06:51 pm Title: Words
Read this way back on ff.net, right? Well, loved it then, love it now. Beautifully written.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:51 pm Title: Words
Awesome! I loved this fic. I also like how you added a little here and there. Very well done.
9 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:29 pm Title: Words
Wow. I remember this fic from awhile back. Glad you brought it over here.
Lovely.