Date: July 01, 2009 03:52 pm Title: Say It Like You Mean It
Aw, I loved this one! Short n' sweet. Very sweet. Just to be clear, what's the age difference between Liv and Jack? In the early chapters, it was three-four years, but in later ones, it was only two.... But I really enjoyed this one, it was realistic, fluffy, and just plain fun. JAM's always in character, and I love the kids you've created for them!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I like the short and sweet stories, I think they're my favorite to write. I checked my notes just to be sure because I always plan their ages before I write the chapters and the difference between Jack and Liv is 2 years, the difference between Jack and Gavin is 4. I checked past stories, which ones did it look there was 3 or 4 years?
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2009 10:52 pm Title: Say It Like You Mean It
My brother and I used to fight like this all the time, it brings back memories! Nice job seeing Jim not be a perfect parent and losing his patience, even with his pride and joy.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I think for the most part he'd be a great dad but he's going to have his good and bad days, just like any other. But he'd be way hott either way, haha.
9 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2009 10:34 am Title: Say It Like You Mean It
So adorable! I babysit a pair of siblings and the "he took my seat argument" sounds strangly familiar :)
I agree, following the Halpert homelife, would be out of place for the show. Sigh..I guess I'll just have to live it through fanfics!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it! I am working on another couple chapters so hopefully that will help with not seeing this stuff on the show :)
Date: June 30, 2009 07:07 am Title: Say It Like You Mean It
YAY I've missed Liv, so what a nice surprise to wake up to this morning =)
Awesome!!!
Author's Response: JHalpert (Jenn) and I have kind of decided Liv is our favorite too. It almost makes me feel bad because I focus stories on her and push the other kids to the back burner. Hopefully I can focus on all of them a little more evenly in the future, but I'm glad you enjoyed this one and I may even have something else up by the end of the week.
Date: June 30, 2009 05:46 am Title: Say It Like You Mean It
I think first review for this chapter woop woop! Sarah you know I love these kiddos and their naughtiness mmmm daddy jim just keeps getting better. another fantastic chapter it was so nice to see work from you again :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm got some others here and there, so maybe I am feeling it again, hopefully this last long enough for me to give some attention to Gavin and Maddie! Those poor kids get no love!