9 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2009 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful and sweet. You captured Pam's voice very well. I'm getting all emotional like your Pam. Really a great story. Thanks for the read!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was kinda worried about it so I'm glad you liked it. You're very welcome. My pleasure. :)
Date: May 20, 2009 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that's cute! I really love how you put Pam's thoughts on the letter how when they found out about the baby and how she is going to feel when once the baby is born. Also I can SO see Jim doing that, going to the nearest store to get baby books right way because he's just so elated and excited about the pregnancy, he wants to learn and be there for her along the way. It's so sweet!! I hope you write some more! =)
-Dani
Author's Response: Thanks!! I wrote this late last night because I couldn't fall asleep! LOL! Anyway I'm so glad that it seemed realistic to you. Thank you so much for the sweet review. More to come!
Date: May 20, 2009 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
::sigh:: Oh I'm dying. This is...ugh...you just took out my heart and like gave it a good squeeze! I LOVE that they went and bought books immediately and I LOVE that Pam is writing a letter, and I especially love that they're calling the baby Jellybean because she's the size of one...holy cow. Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Nice! Did you get your heart back? I don't want you to die via fanfic.
My mind is so bizarre - the jellybean thing is what I thought of on my way home. I thought it was perfect.
And I've clearly got a problem.
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2009 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah! Adorableness times ten! Love that you made Pam such a spaz, lol. (:
Author's Response: I just had a feeling she'd be a tad overwhelmed. Thanks so much!!