Date: April 06, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
...more please?
Date: April 03, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad you decided to pick back up this story! It's just captivating to read. I can't wait until they somehow meet...
Date: April 02, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 5
:( Write more, please. Pam's so sad :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the review;)
Date: April 02, 2007 03:52 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, they actually talked on the phone! And Pam was awkward and Jim didn't know anything! That was painful, yet awesome. I hope she finds a way to make further contact soon.
Author's Response:
Well, she does have a plan, so here's hoping;) Thanks for the review:)
Date: April 02, 2007 02:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, the heartbreak, the silly, silly heartbreak. I love how you're taking this, where you seem to be taking this, and the pace, along with the amazing plotline and the unbelievable Pamness you've got in every line of this, it's just amazing. Brilliant.
Also, yes, thank you, NO KAREN! HALLELUJAH. Our Beesly's got quite a bit to work around, already - what with Jim being quite Jim from what I've seen [I refuse to think that any Jim except our Jim would be so incredibly nice when talking to a slightly silly-sounding person on the phone who doesn't even know who she called :P] but still not being the Jim we know because we all know that our Jim is part Beesly, too. It'll be interesting to see how he's like without the added Pam-ness to him, if that makes sense. I'm interested to see how you take that - not that I'd be worried, because you've gotten all of them perfect so far. :D
Yes, anyway, Pam has enough of obstacles to get to Jim, and put Karen in would just be unfair. Not just to her, but to us. Those cursed writers!! ;)
OK, yes, so, I love this story, and I can't wait for an update, at all. At all.
Author's Response: Well, now I feel the burden of responsibilty:D But seriously, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I enjoying making up plots, but my writing is rather... minimalistic, I think, so I guess a lot of the characterization is either non-existant or has to be read between the lines... So I'm happy to hear that someone thinks I got the characters right;)
Author's Response: Well, now I feel the burden of responsibilty:D But seriously, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I enjoying making up plots, but my writing is rather... minimalistic, I think, so I guess a lot of the characterization is either non-existant or has to be read between the lines... So I'm happy to hear that someone thinks I got the characters right;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Whew! I'm glad Jim's around, and close. It was kind of heartbreaking to not have him know Pam when she called, but I have faith in you - you'll fix this soon enough!
Author's Response: Well, I wouldn't count on the heartbreak ending right away, but I will admit I am extremely fond of happy endings;) Thanks for the review;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh, so painful - but I can't wait until she goes to see him - hope it's soon!!!
Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Moxie:)
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this story is breaking my heart. Calling him to hear his voice when he doesn't even know she exists! This is so unbelievably good and intriguing.
Author's Response: Sorry for breaking your heart;) It will get better eventually;)