Date: January 06, 2010 06:09 am Title: Jelly Beans
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thank, thank you very much! I'm sure glad this idea worked out okay. And I have you to thank! =)
Date: January 05, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Jelly Beans
loved this. brilliant story and ben an ellie were such a cute touch =]
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was nice writting for Ellie and Ben. Can't wait for the real JAM baby! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 05, 2010 06:59 pm Title: Jelly Beans
loved this. brilliant story and ben an ellie were such a cute touch =]
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the story! I love Ellie and Ben too! They were so much fun to write for! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 05, 2010 12:25 am Title: Jelly Beans
if im crying im silly too?. gosh what a great story. a really cute endind.
i love all the memories the re-living the memory of their first time, and the cut tie. oww =)
i wonder what was the prank on dwigth, thoung.
goshh thank you for this story it was angstsy and romantic at the same time. this idea was awesome.
Author's Response: It's never silly to cry!(hopefully they are happy tears?!?) I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for reviewing it, it means a lot! =)
Date: January 04, 2010 08:52 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Aww this makes me sad that it's all over! Well almost. Wow, adding Roy and bringing Kenny into it again was a big shock but I like it. And of course I love Ben and Ellie.
Author's Response: You know what? It makes me sad it's over too (except for a short epilogue, which will be done soon). I wasn't sure about adding Roy, but I don't know, I wanted Pam to have at least see him once after the accident and I thought it was the best way. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ellie and Ben are awesome, and fun part is that they are real "little" people in my life! =)Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 06:32 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Oh my god, that was so sweet. I love the scene at the grocery store, Roy's temperment and actions seem very realistic - nice job there. I also thought the last scene with Pam coming downstairs was beautiful, the happy and the sad, and all in between. It was so special that it was a family moment. Great job with this story, it was so well done! I've had a great time reading this amazing story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking this story! The grocery store scene is one of my favorites. I just like envisioning them as a normal family. I love putting the Halperts in normal situations. I'm so glad you liked the last scene. That was the pivitol point of the story. I'm glad it came out well! Thank you so much for reading and for all your wonderful reviews. =)
Date: January 04, 2010 05:18 pm Title: Jelly Beans
I will miss this one. You did a great job wrapping it up. Thanks for a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm gald you enjoyed it! =)
Date: January 04, 2010 03:14 pm Title: Jelly Beans
perfect end to a perfect story
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! =)
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 02:17 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Astonishing, outstanding, and wonderful! I absolutely loved this story. Well done! I'm so sad that it's over though. Maybe you could do an epilogue? :) This story was fabulous. I read it in progress, but I'm going to go read the whole thing all over again. You did such a great job and such a surprise at who caused the accident! I didn't see that coming. (and thanks for your review on my collaboration!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked this story! There is an epilogue coming up... so wait for that! And also, thank you so much for all your lovely reviews! ;)
Date: January 04, 2010 05:23 am Title: Jelly Beans
Argh. Kenny was the cause of it all. I did not see that coming. /Pam I'm a sucker for a happy ending, and this sure delivered.
Author's Response: I love happy endings too! I love all that is fluff! Haha! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! =)