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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

Awww the package was Jim! LOL! I was touched by Jim's heartfelt confessions...he really has sacrificed a lot. I hope Pam takes care of his heart. ♥

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 12:01 pm Title: Part 2: The Clearing

Aw, poor Karen. That break up was heartbreaking.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 11:58 am Title: The Thunderstorm

Aw, I am in love with the way you write. I hope you don't mind my spamming you with reviews. I'm sick today and need something to take my mind off my sore throat. =(

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 06:59 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

Aww, happy ending. Still feel bad for Karen, but Jim and Pam just belong together. I forgot to mention that chapter 1 reminded me of Hinder's Lips of an Angel. Was that intentional?

Author's Response: I have never read it. If it is similar, didn't know it. Sorry. =-( Im new here.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 06:54 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

Oh no, I can't believe Karen is there! I feel so bad for her...but I'm not a Jim/Karen shipper, so I'll get over it.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:49 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

Very sweet. I especially liked the cliffhanger ending at the beginning of part 1.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 09:24 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing

Wow, what an awesome chapter!  The break-up was so well done. I like that Karen figured it out before Jim could actually say it. And I loved Karen's last line.

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 07:09 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing

Wow. Amazing. I thought this was a one-shot, but I was pleasantly surprised.

I usually don't review on stuff I like a lot (it's the same principle of only marking questions that are wrong on a test) but you've by far exceeded expectations. Congrats! 

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 07:01 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing

Wow. Amazing. I thought this was a one-shot, but I was pleasantly surprised.

I usually don't review on stuff I like a lot (it's the same principle of only marking questions that are wrong on a test) but you've by far exceeded expectations. Congrats! 

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:54 am Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

so good!  i read the first chapter, ans i was like, "this can't be over!"  then i saw there were still two more to go!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:46 am Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

Now that was a good reunion.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 10:31 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain

Very sweet.  I hope something like this happens on the show!

Reviewer: Mel60 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 10:28 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

I loved the little twist at the end.

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 08:18 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

I actually did see that coming.  I like Karen, but seriously.  It's all about the Jim and Pam.  Very nicely done.

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 08:14 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

wow, i didn't expect that ending! you're going to leave this story at that?! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Well...maybe I could do something a bit more....=-)~

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 08:03 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

so good!!!!!

 i agree you should continue it :)



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 08:03 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

so good!!!!!

 i agree you should continue it :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 07:56 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

Wow. Did not see the end coming! Great story. I agree that you should continue it.



Author's Response: Thanks I think I will!

Reviewer: eyegypt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 07:08 pm Title: The Thunderstorm

Great ending! Poor Karen. I wish you would continue it

Author's Response:

THANKS! So you think its the good basis for an ongoing story? That might work...(strokes chin evilly) =-)

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