6 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 10:43 pm Title: All the wrong things on fire
This has been so heart-wrenching to read, but I can't wait to read more. I would love it if Jim would reach out and shake some sense into Pam.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I would love it too, and that is what will happen! There will be a resolution!
Date: July 08, 2009 05:37 am Title: All the wrong things on fire
OMG, I kept expecting it to stop somehow. Jim is being so cruel to himself. (and yet I'm still reading)
Author's Response: I know - I almost couldn't write anymore! But then I changed my mind because I came up with a good ending. ;) Thanks so much for the comment!
Date: July 02, 2009 07:34 am Title: All the wrong things on fire
I can't wait to see where this is going!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I really appreciate your enthusiasm for the story! :) More is coming shortly!
9 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2009 07:25 am Title: All the wrong things on fire
I really like this idea, of going back and seeing a road not taken. I particularly like how you describe that churning unrest in Jim as he decides he must do this, for himself as well as her. One tiny nitpick (I'm an editor, I can't help myself): In the second paragraph, you have "to bare the pain" and I believe you want "bear". Although he sort of does "bare" his pain to Pam on Casino Night!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your comments! And thanks for the edit, too! I am going to change it right now! :)
9 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2009 10:57 pm Title: All the wrong things on fire
Ah, a nice, angsty story that maybe will end fluffy? haha either way, it's awesome :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, it will end fluffy! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2009 10:44 pm Title: All the wrong things on fire
I think it is an interesting start you have here. I don't know that Jim would go, and I am glad we never had to find out, but I am glad you are writing this just so we get a glipse of what it might have been like.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I agree - I'm so glad we never had to see the wedding, but I couldn't resist writing something angsty about it, with a fluffy ending, of course! Thanks again!!
Date: June 30, 2009 08:38 pm Title: All the wrong things on fire
I went back and forth after seeing the summary on wether to read this, because I didn't know if I could even stand to read about Pam marrying Roy. But you've summed up Jim perfectly, he would go to her wedding, because no matter what happens, he's her best friend.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know how you feel - I had trouble writing it! There are more chapters coming, and I promise that you will be happy with the ending. :) Thanks again!