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Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2009 12:07 pm Title: There is confrontation in their eyes

Wow-intense chapter, not sure how the happy ending will come into play after this. But with your level of writing so far, I'm sure it'll be good.

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! I'm working on the next chapter and the happy ending still seems distant, but it will work! Thanks again! It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 01:59 pm Title: There is confrontation in their eyes

YIKES. I read the first two chapters of this last week and said "Wait. Let it get a little further along and then comment." But MAN... This was INTENSE. I had to write you. I love this. It's always been so frustrating (but... understandable in an odd way) about how much in denial Pam was. Great story. More!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear that you've been enjoying it! It's always bothered me how much Pam ignored the fact that her and Jim were meant to be together, like you said with the denial, so I just had to write this to show how much she really denied him! Thanks so much!! More is on the way!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 06:23 am Title: There is confrontation in their eyes

You are killing me. How is this going to get resolved?

Author's Response: Hahaha sorry! It will be resolved! You'll see!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 03:39 am Title: There is confrontation in their eyes

Well, you've certainly built up the tension...I'm so curious to see where this will go, now that Pam's a married woman.

Author's Response: Thank you! More is on the way, and there will be a resolution!

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