1 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2020 12:56 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
I LOVE that you've filled out some of the backstory here - especially for Phyllis, who could easily stare in her own rom com for just the reasons you've identified.
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2009 06:24 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
as i said i read the entire thing in 5 minutes, so yes i read the rest. i was INCREDIBLE. i'm so amazed at your awesomeness. like an awesome blossom, extra awesome! seriously, (god, what did andy say that time???) you need to learn how to accept compliments (what did he say that time??? do you know what i mean? when he told somebody in some episode that they needed to take something lessons???)
anyway. it was amazing. and hurry up and write another great story. and fast. i have one more week until school, and i'm bored out of my office obsessed mind.
Author's Response: oh sorry, I meant I hope you enjoy the rest of the unwritten chapters :) I'll try to get them up soon!
And thank you again!! Your reviews have made my day!
P.S no, I can't think of exactly what Andy was talking about, but I vaguely remember it...
Date: August 30, 2009 05:04 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
ARE YOU KIDDING ME????!?!!!!? (as spoken from Andy) - that was truly your first story???? that was one of the best one's i've read, i read the whole thing in five minutes it was that good.
sorry, i'm just reeling here, i was great! wow. calming down here. somewhat.
that was just amazing. congrats.
Author's Response: hahaha thanks so much! When I read your review I literally giggled out loud, it made me so happy! And yes, this is my first story. I hope you enjoy the rest :)
Date: August 20, 2009 09:52 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
I am really enjoying this story. First of all, I'm very much of a fan of stories about more minor characters, but it's not just that. This is very well-written and funny and I can't wait to see who you write about next.
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2009 05:36 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
"She still wants kids" made me very sad for Phyllis, but then I read "She has never been this happy" and I got my happy back. Great job of capturing Phyllis - and her blush and giggle!
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 06:43 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
LMAO this was so great. I LOVE Phyllis so this made me smile!
8 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2009 08:37 am Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
Oh so sweet, and real to the character! Although really, who hasn't had a crush on Jim at some point:) Phyllis has always been a favorite of mine and I'm so glad that she's really happy. Please do Creed next, There's just so many scary possibilities!
Author's Response: Hahaha I definitely have had a crush on Jim! I think I will do Creed... I was going to do him for Chapter 2, but then I went with Jim. Creed is coming!
Date: July 10, 2009 06:55 am Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
Ok, I am LOVING this concept. Nicely done. Keep 'em coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks!! The idea of telling secrets and quirks is from Fanfiction.Net, where there are tons of them!
Date: July 09, 2009 12:40 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
so awesome. I think you've really captured Phyllis.
Author's Response: Awww thanks!! Not capturing the character was what I was most worried about while I was writing, so I'm so glad you think so.
8 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima
Aw! Very cute!
I can't wait for your analysis's on the others!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm not quite sure who I'll do next. I'm thinking Creed...