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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2009 05:43 pm Title: Jim, an anti-footballer

I love how you are "fleshing out" your vignettes ("fleshing" is no doubt not the appropriate word but my brain is tired and its the best I can do.) How sweet that he hates football because of Roy and that he loves Scranton, but most importantly, he loves Pam more. This line is the best:

"Jim is pretty sure that his feelings for Pam are constantly tatooed across his face, because when people see them together, they give him a look that says “I think I’m going to vomit if you don’t stop staring at her”.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2009 06:48 pm Title: Jim, an anti-footballer

Brilliant, so much about Jim that i do honestly want to know, and that was just perfecto :)

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2009 02:08 pm Title: Jim, an anti-footballer

I love everything about this chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad!

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2009 08:31 am Title: Jim, an anti-footballer

Just when you think it's impossible to be anymore in love with Jim Halpert, someone writes a backstory like this. It's probably a little crazy to care about fictional people,but at least I'm among other crazy people on this site:) I was going to say the bit about avoiding football is exactly how Jim's mind works, but the whole thing is so completely in character. Any chance your planning to do the whole office?

Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried the football part made him sound too bitter, so I'm glad you thought it was in character! I am definitely going to do the entire office :)

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