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Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 07:01 pm Title: Jim - Season 2 I never got the chance to tell you how beautiful you are.

"Valentine’s Day – Lonely people don’t like talking about together people. "

Thats how I feel about my friend when she talks about her new boyfriend.

Author's Response: I am so sorry you have to go through that aimzers84. I know how you feel, its horrible. Thanks for the comment though, I'm glad I could make the feelings real.

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2009 10:27 am Title: Jim - Season 2 I never got the chance to tell you how beautiful you are.

Wow, I'm really impressed how quickly you got this chapter out, considering how intense this season was. It's funny, I feel like Jim loved Pam forver, but at the start of Season 6 they'll have been apart 3 seasons and together 3 seasons. (If you can count the first season as a real season) So why does seems like it took them so long ot get together? No complaints, about the length of your replies, I love to read them, I can always appreciate a story more if I feel like I know the author. Now if my reviews get too long, feel free to say so, I know I talk to much:)

Author's Response: Haha, as much as I would love to say that I managed to crank this out in a matter of days, I started writing season 2-Jim before season 1. It still took a while because I spent time on season 2-Jim while doing season 1 of both Jim and Pam. Season2-Pam definitely will take a while because she was a little harder to read and less obvious than Jim was(which you pointed out in your last review :) ). Wow, the time line never occurred to me. I guess when there is pain and heartache involved time seems to slow so the pain is evident. I LOVE long reviews. The longer the better, I feel like I'm getting know the reviewer as well as what they like to see in the writing.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2009 09:45 pm Title: Jim - Season 2 I never got the chance to tell you how beautiful you are.

Quite a few of those hit me in the stomach. Can't wait to see Pam's 'postcards' for season 2. Ugh, then Season 3. Yeah, can't wait for season 3. Cause I can deal with the angst now that it's over. Very creative.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Andastainonmyshirt. Considering the intensity of season 2, I'm glad the 'secrets' got that response. I agree, ugh to season 3... there was far too much heartache in it.

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