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Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 08:49 am Title: Pam - Season 2 - When I kissed him, it was like a thousand burting stars.

I love this one and think you did a great job, for 2 reasons in particular. When I read these lines, (especilly the early ones) I feel like something is hidden, like I still don't know all that was going on in Pam's head. And to me that is Pam at the very core of her character. I mean the whole reason behind the Casino Night angst was that Pam is never completly honest, even with herself. And the second thing I'm not sure if you meant to do it, but it seems like even the pattern of the summeries reflects her. Some are a little more lighthearted, a little closer to the surface. And then you have these few mixed in, that pinpoint a moment of her vulnerability. Sorry if this is too much, you did say you liked long reviews right? :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry this is so late! But wow, Casinos and Coal Walks. Thank you. I tried to make some lighthearted and some obvious, so I'm glad you picked up on that. The "Sexual Harassment" 'secret' definitely had a lot of weight and I wanted to show that sometimes Pam has no idea what is going on inside her own head. In that episode, we see that Pam talks about Jim and even her mother has figured it out, but she's still living in this "Monday to Friday friendship" bubble she created for herself and doesnt want to face her feelings. I like long reviews the way Jim likes Italian food. :) Thanks again.

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