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Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2016 10:05 pm Title: Pam - Season 3 I’m waiting everyday for you to come home.

Oh wow, this is so great, each little line just captures the episode and also packs a punch, S2 Pam is definitely hard to get into the mindset of IMHO but each line felt true. S3 Jim is also a little tough (for me) but I love all your lines there too "Truth is – I don’t want this to become the relationship that changes my life." just kind of said everything about his feelings for Karen.

And the way you bookend S3 Pam with stopping and starting painting? Oh man, I may have gotten a little misty eyed. Great read!

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2010 07:58 am Title: Pam - Season 3 I’m waiting everyday for you to come home.

i loved this chapter! keep it up. i can't wait for season 4 JAM!

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