10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2009 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
oh i love this. honestly, the fluffier the better. :o)
i also think it's hilarious that, since you wrote this before the episode aired, how completely off you were about how pam's grandmother reacts. ;o)
8 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. It was so beautiful and sweet and their love and happiness just oozed out of it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2009 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
You can't imagine a time where you won't look at the baby when she's a baby, a child, an adult, and immediately fall in love with your wife all over again.
Well I couldn't copy the whole story so that line will have to do. It's so perfect, but the whole story is so absolutly beautiful. Can you believe the wedding's actually happening? I can't wait! You've got Jim nailed, I bet he'll be the one to give it away, and proably by putting his hands on her stomach too often :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2009 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh this is just so so lovely. one thing, grammar-wise: the first paragraph is in 3rd person, and the rest of the story is in 2nd person. just something you might want to fix. :o)
Date: September 27, 2009 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1
"I love that you have to drink apple juice at your wedding reception," you whisper against her mouth.
this story was SO fantastic!
it makes the waiting for this episode just a little bit easier :)
gorgeous.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2009 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love when she sees that her "bump" has grown. LOL so sweet and touching and fantastically fluffy. :)
Date: September 26, 2009 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey Pam, the baby could be a 19 pound giant ;). Anyways, this was way to cute. Even if my mom decided she needed to talk outloud to herself the entire time about doing random chores around the house (Pam and Jim being cute fluff... "watering the plants now this one is really thirsty oh did you move this now")
Date: September 26, 2009 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1
so sweet. so them =]
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2009 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh....really? Yanana? Really?...God, that's perfect. Every little moment was just so achingly sweet. And those precise little slices of life that you tease out...what with how babies have their own sense of humor. Or the moment, Pam's tummy just popped out over night. This is just so, so right. I love everything about this.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2009 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is just so sweet and full of fluff. I love it and your stories are amazing, keep it up! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2009 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yanana, I adore this. So many lines I would quote if only I could master this !@#$%^& computer *sigh* Let me just say that it's the whipped cream on the sundae that has been this lovely day :)
Date: September 25, 2009 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, such nice sweet fluff. I loved this especially: "She hums a little laugh, and you feel her hand drag down and lightly touch the fabric over her stomach again. When it pulls, the subtle bump is more pronounced and you both notice. Your eyes flick to hers, and you just smile and she does, too and you press your lips to her cheek again and just hold, hold, hold onto it."
I can really see them in this exchange just as you've written it. Thanks for keeping our blood sugars appropriately high in anticipation of the wedding. Nice job.
Date: September 25, 2009 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Squeee!!! My sweet craving has been satisfied! This was incredibly well written and awesome! It makes me want Oct 8 to be here right now, now 3...2...1...Now!!! Great Job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2009 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gees, why do you hate me so much? You try and kill me each week with your newest most awesome fics.
This was outstanding as usual, so perfectly in character and just beautifully written.
Date: September 25, 2009 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I cannot wait for this episode and for Pam to be big & pregnant! I think Jim will just about burst.
Nicely done, yanana.