10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2009 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow...this story is awesome!! :) Even though part of me thinks what Jim did was cruel...I would totally be ok if he did that to me!! Also his little speech was so so so sweet. On another note your smut was amazing and very very very HOT!! I can't believe that was your first time writing it. It was perfect!! Great story!! Loved it from beginning to end!!! :)
Author's Response: Hooray! I do agree that he was a little cruel but I was watching season two and as much as I love sensitive, thoughtful jim I was dying to see what would have happened if he went about things differently. I'm so happy you reviewed this little story, was so very nervous! Thanks so much for the support!
Date: October 24, 2009 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
enjoying what you're doing so far :)
Author's Response: why thank you! i hope you enjoyed the rest of it as well :) thanks for the feedback!
Date: October 24, 2009 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
Give you a head's up, huh? lol. WOW. I would not be worried if I were you. Not only was dom!Jim super hot, but I loved him falling asleep with the baby and Pam being so enamored with him two years later.....this was a lot of fun!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I had to add the bit at the end cuz sexy jim + adorkable daddy jim = total love :D
Date: October 24, 2009 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
THAT WAS HOTTER THAN...a HOT, HOT thing. The slow build up...so methodical. And then...WOW. Just wow. I loooove, dirty talking Jim. lol
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2009 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Vicodinfm, I so loved this. You took mild-mannered Jim Halpert, paper salesman, and showed me what he was made of. Love how he didn't sit back and watch the girl go home with an inferior guy. While you shared the dirty thoughts in his head, you didn't substantially change his outward character. Well, there was all the sexin', but you know what I mean; ) I love how he totally unnerved Pam and then moved in for the kill. SexGod!Jim is more than OK by me. And the "I can't?!" Whooooaaaaa, mama! Great job, love.
Author's Response: What a lovely, generous reviewer! Not just one lovely and thoughtful review but you did one for evey chapter, I feel so spoiled :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I was so nervous because it was my first smutty piece but your wonderful comments make it so worthwhile, thank you :D
Author's Response: What a lovely, generous reviewer! Not just one lovely and thoughtful review but you did one for evey chapter, I feel so spoiled :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I was so nervous because it was my first smutty piece but your wonderful comments make it so worthwhile, thank you :D
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2009 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Man oh man oh man! ::rushes to last chapter::
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2009 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Was that terrible?! Are you kidding?! This is the best way to spend a rainy Saturday afternoon! Bravo! : D
Date: October 24, 2009 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
I am so loving this! The build up is incredibly erotic.
Date: October 24, 2009 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nooooo! Definitely not dragging. Enjoying the ride. This is really great.
Date: October 24, 2009 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy cow. This sexy, confident side of Jim is quite a welcome change to the usual S2 storyline.
Date: October 24, 2009 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I'm going to like this! Nice start. On to chapter 2...