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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2009 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really like this!!  I think you do a really good job with Jim's internal struggle.  These two lines I especially liked:

She's breaking me apart, piece by piece, just like she always is.

I was drunk on her and she was drunk on pink drinks...

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2009 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ouch.  S2 had it's pounding of the grief bone, too.  Nicely done, yanana.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2009 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

That last part made me tear up, in a totally good way though! Loving it so far!

Reviewer: Katie J Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2009 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, nice work! - I enjoy a fic that makes you hurt ;) Jim hoping/praying that she would twist her ring right off especially got to me :( Luckily, Pam had already come to her senses!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2009 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, yanana. You wreck me. ::mental note: remember to blink::

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