Reviews For I'd Have to Blow My Brains Out
Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Date: November 01, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really liked this image:
The car slows at a yellow light that I could've easily made it through. I want more time like this, more time just the two of us.
I like the way Jim almost makes it sound like the car has a mind of its own and slows at the yellow light. But then he goes right on to admit that he wants more time alone with Pam. Nice juxtaposition.
Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2009 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Date: October 31, 2009 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Dumb cliffhangers? I hadn't noticed. I'm too busy remembering to breath because of sentences like this:
You make me mess up my words, I feel like my mouth should be on yours; don't you think so?