Date: November 02, 2009 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dang, think of the angst this would have saved...
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think you blew my brains out! Like I said before, everything that comes off your fingertips makes me so happy. Almost as happy and Jim and Pam make each other.
"Jim, do you know I almost kissed you?"
Oh how I love this. I can picture in my head how she would say this! I read this and see it playing out in my head as if JK and JF were in my head and this is their script.
You are magic. I think I'd give almost anything for you to "Take a Chance" every episode.
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is such a great story, I love how well you wrote Jim's inner monologue. I really liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
aww. that was sweet. i just read the whole thing - it was a little slow at the start, but the last chapter and this one were great. nice work - are you continuing? i'm not sure what the status of this one is. i hope you are - this is so good so far! great job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Outstanding! Yanana, are my hero. This was just...delectable, delicious delovely. Happy Halloween and all that jazz. You're the best! You're like the 100 grand bar in my trick-or-treat bag :)