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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 07:02 am Title: Chapter 12

*Squishes fic* oh how I have missed you and your beautiful stories yanana. I'm sending you lots and lots of cyber wine so you can get totally wasted and write millions of masterpieces over the Christmas holidays, mmkay? Deal?

Seriously this was beautiful and as usual, amazing!!!

Keep it up chicken!

Author's Response: thanks. =) we'll see about that wine, haha. i haven't had any in a while. maybe i'm due. ;)

Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 06:53 am Title: Chapter 12

This was really great! I was so excited to see an update from you! I'm happy MTT is back! Yay! This was really cute and full of awesome! Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: definitely glad to have this site back, that's for sure. glad you're enjoying. =)

Reviewer: myalias Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2009 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ah, loved this one too. You're A/N might be right--no one is this happy all the time in real life. But you're story is set up so that it doesn't matter that they're always happy in each chapter--it's not like you're trying to document every moment of the nine months. It's just little bits and pieces--you only wrote about the happy moments, and it feels totally real to me. Great job!

Author's Response: what you talked about is just exactly what i'm going for with these -- glad that's believable. thanks very much for your review. =)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2009 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ah yanana...So glad I have this trusty phone to check for updates of my favorite stories! This chapter did not disappoint, friend! Great job. You are so excellent at capturing these quiet intimate moments between them. So soft and warm. I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, lovefool! I'm glad people are still reading this stupid little story. =) Also, I hear you on the phone thing! Thank god for mine, during this mtt crisis. ;)

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2009 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

dear yanana,

i'm just jumping on the review wagon now, due to a certain thing called major laziness. :) but i wanted to tell you how unbelievably perfect i think these little snapshots are. the last one in particular was my favorite. the way you write jim and pam is so real and cute and just so THEM!

LOVE. IT.
keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: hey kaat! thanks for the review! love to hear from you, since i love the sweet stories i read from you. glad you're enjoying. =)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2009 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

Woohoo! I got on the archive and nothing exploded! Fingers crossed...

Yanana, I hope you have enough ideas to take us to February, because each update makes me so happy and excited. I love envisioning Jim with his hands all over Pam's belly, talking and waiting for kicks. Fantastic.

Author's Response: there are definitely some left, i don't know if it will carry onto february but you never know, lol. enjoy your reviews always, thanks for taking the time again. =) and here's to hoping stupid people stay away from our site for gooood.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

beautiful chapter - great job!

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 11

:) Very cute chapter, I loved it!! Glad to see an update!

Author's Response: thanks! =)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2009 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 11

This fic is still kicking ass, don't you worry. I love love love what you're doing here. I look forward to reading it whenever I get emailed the alert you have updated =)

Author's Response: what a nice review, thank you. i'm glad you're still liking this story. =)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

oh my god, the fingernails outburst at the end reminded me of Juno - only this is such a happier story! lol. great chapter, i like this one the most out of all the ones so far in this story, the longing of pam's to hold a baby is so realistic sounding. great job! i can't wait to keep reading. please make sure to have an epilogue after the birth of the baby to show how pam's longing of holding her own baby comes true. i think that would be beautiful. great chapter!

Author's Response: ha, i didn't think about that part of juno. and yes, it is a much happier story, thank goodness. i have them all pre-written for the most part, so i hope you enjoy the ending vignette i have planned. =)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2009 07:22 am Title: Chapter 10

Yanana, I so appreciate your posting this.  You are a real trooper!  I so enjoyed it.  Less intense, perhaps, but romantic as ever. 

Author's Response: thanks nanreg! i wish this insanity webcrap on our pretty little site would end already. thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2009 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

*kisses this fic* I've missed ittttt!!!!!

You are my hero lol :)

Author's Response: haha thank you for the reviews, as always. =)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2009 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 9

Beautiful as always!

Author's Response: thanks. =)

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2009 10:21 am Title: Chapter 9

Loved this chapter, yanana! =)

Author's Response: glad you did, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2009 06:20 am Title: Chapter 9

Yanana, this was so peaceful and...romantic.  I determined as I was reading this that that's what I love best about anything you write.  No matter what, it always has a great sense of romance. 

Author's Response: nanreg, i take that as such a huge compliment, it's my favorite thing to underline about these two, and i'm glad that you read that! thank you!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2009 12:52 am Title: Chapter 9

guh! yanana this was beyond words. SO GOOD! :D

Author's Response: thanks! =)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2009 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 9

She had awoken to the same image, years ago when the sun rose and found them for the first time. Now, years later, when their history, love and promise had made her swollen and awake (and complete and full),

Are you serious? That's all KINDS of gorgeous. 

Every time I think one of your chapters is my favorite, you prove me wrong by writing something like this.  Beautiful work here.



Author's Response: thank you lovefool! you are way too kind. =)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2009 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

definitely! i loved the episode tonight - finally one that was funny, had the entire cast actively participating, was productive with dunder mifflin, and seriously, was just a good show.

what did you think of murder? anyway, i can't wait to read your next chapter of babytimes!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2009 06:25 am Title: Chapter 8

Hey, I reviewed this the other day but I put it under the wrong chapter (I'm an idiot) so I'm moving it now to Chapter 8.
Holy humina, batman. This is fantastic. My favorite one of these by far. Sweetly passionate, I think you capture insanely excited daddytobe Jim Halpert to the "t." I'll be reading this one a lot of times.
Date: November 11, 2009 08:18 am

Author's Response: Ha, either way, thanks for the review! This was one of my favorite chapters as well.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

yanana,
I haven't been great at reviewing, but I really do love every part if this! This last chapter was sexy... have you been getting into the wine, again? ;)

Author's Response: No Arbor Mist for this girl lately, haha. In fact, I think the bottle I drank during that little fiasco (from around Niagara on) has a swig left under my bedside table and I just haven't dumped it yet, lol. So thanks for reminding me to do that, and thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 8

Dude, do not stop these, ever!!! Loving this little series so much :)

Author's Response: Ha, thank you!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 10:42 am Title: Chapter 8

wow. very... uh... lustful??? lol. i liked this, but to be honest it wasn't my favorite chapter. i guess i just thought something was lacking in it. i think in all the other chapters you show 2 elements of their relationship, just the two of them excited about the baby, and then something representing the baby - so all three of them together. i guess i just thought something was missing there. oh well. i can't wait to read the next chapters!

Author's Response: I like to think that the baby was the biggest part of this chapter, Jim's "lustful" actions were all a part of his excitement and passion for his baby and the woman he was sharing it all with. He's a happy guy these days! =)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 10:28 am Title: Chapter 8

such a romantic chapter! these are beautiful, keep them coming

Author's Response: Thanks! =)

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 09:10 am Title: Chapter 8

These last two chapters have been the best so far. I really like your style when you pare it down a bit as you have here. Several lovely turns of phrase here; a surge of want creeping up his spine is particularly nice. Keep it up. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. =)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2009 09:01 am Title: Chapter 8

I have to tell you - I've enjoyed these last two chapters more than the rest of the story altogether.  The phrases you've turned here and the whole tone of these last two is just lovely.  I know you started this as a few little bits and pieces but I'd love it if you'd continue more along these lines.  You've painted quite a pretty picture here.

Author's Response: So funny that this little story is getting such nice reviews. You guys are all way too kind. Thank you for the nice words, I'm glad you enjoyed. =)

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