9 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2010 05:55 pm Title: Ho, Ho, Ho
I'm so glad this is a chapter for Andy and Tuna. Oh, I mean Jim ;o) How funny that Andy is Pam's Secret Santa and how determined he was to find the perfect gift for her. Such an Andy thing to do. So thoughtful, so sweet, so inappropriate. And Jim's such a wonderful boyfriend, making sure Andy will get something that Pam would like. You did a wonderful job in writing both of these characters. I laughed quite a bit at parts of their conversation.
Looking forward to more.
Date: January 11, 2010 06:01 am Title: Ho, Ho, Ho
Very well written, again, and I can truly hear your Andy delivering every one of his lines. This was letter perfect Andyspeak: “Because I want Pam to like me, dude!” Andy interjected vehemently as they rounded the display of gift sets, effectively drawing Jim’s attention. Off his concerned look, Andy bowed his head, and he frowned (pouted) at the set of Vanilla and Honey bath supplies. “It’s just that sometimes I think I kind of … get on her nerves or something? She gives me this look when we’re talking, like she’s envisioning something really, really bad or violent happening to me. It’s totally weird and kind of makes me uncomfortable, honestly.”
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for your great review! I love Andy so much, he's got to be tied with Jim and Pam as far as favorites go for me. I'm so glad I'm getting him right, as I think he may be one of the more difficult character (spare Michael and Dwight) to write for, but it's so much fun when I think of something and it does sound right.
I'm so glad you're reading and enjoying. Thank you very, very much. :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2010 09:41 pm Title: Ho, Ho, Ho
You tease lmao. But I agree, Andy would go on and on about it, and it wouldn't be anything too naughty or drastic lol.
Loved how you captured both Jim and Andy. Very excited to enjoying a new reader like yourself so much :)
Author's Response: Well, it's not like Andy is Michael. ;) Knowing Michael, he'd whip out something obscene from a "toy" store. Andy would just make undue worry for everyone, I don't think his idea of naughty is anything too terrible or extreme.
I'm so pleased I got Jim right. Sometimes I think he'd be easy to write for, but he's kind of an elusive character to capture just right, you know?
Thanks so, so much for reviewing! I'm really happy you're liking my fic, especially since I am so new!