10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2010 10:48 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Wow, another beautiful chapter! This was so sad, yet again and for lack of a better word. I was at a funeral today, too, but not at the burial - but really, what a coincidence that I would be reading a story about funerals today! I'm just fortunate that my godfather died of cancer at 75 versus Pam dying at probably 30 from childbirth. What a difference. Anyway, this is a wonderful story, and I can't wait to see how you continue. I love all the flashbacks - keep them up!
Date: January 09, 2010 01:07 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
this is just so heartbreaking that i can't help but read it. can't wait to see more =]
9 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Very original, I like it a lot. I can't wait to see Pam watching Jim... and for Ellie to continue seeing Pam... ohh and then Jim maybe realising she's there with him aw!!!
My only criticism, is the exchange between Michael and Jim, I just couldn't see it.
Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter very much and I look forward to reading more :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2010 09:35 am Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Hi! So, this has to be the first story that I've read that deals with character death that doesn't make me cry my eyes out and stop reading, so thank you. I did get misty eyed, but I want to continue reading this. You're a great writer, and thanks again for creating a story about this topic that I can get through with just misty eyes. I hope you update soon, can't wait to see the rest of this.
Date: January 07, 2010 11:16 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
oww this is so touching. pleasee update soon.