10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 02:54 pm Title: Prayers That Are Heard
Ooooooooooooooh excellent ending :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 02:41 pm Title: Prayers That Are Heard
Pam's very funny in her innocence about what heaven is like and how she couldn't really stand it because of unfinished business on Earth.
I love the fact that Ellie can still communicate with her mom. It makes me sad though how Jim is still in pain. Although that last part about him feeling Pam's kiss?? LOVE it!
Please continue soon!
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 12:19 am Title: Prayers That Are Heard
Oh my god, he felt the kiss! That is so cool! I can't wait for more, this is so interesting (albeit, occasionally frustrating...) but awesome, too. Sorry - I abuse the word awesome too much here at MTT (just because I'm trying to channel my inner cheerleading Katy!). Great job, and please get chapter 3 back up so I can reread it! This story is so fresh and creative, I cannot get over how delighted I am to read something that has never been written about before. Long live new ideas!