10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2010 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5
I don't know why the "don't get your panties in a bunch" "that's disgusting" line makes me giggle so much, but it does. LOL and I really love this chapter :)
Author's Response: LOL thanks :) I giggled when writing it, I love how eccentric Emma is, and I just felt like she'd say something weird like that. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2010 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh my goodness, I can't wait to have them meet again! And by the way, the bit with Claire and Christine was perfect, I like that she didn't just rub off what she said, and that even though she tried to be put together in front of her friends (well somewhat) she didn't stand up for them being, well... bitches. Good word for it!
Great chapter, this was awesome and I can't wait for the next one! Are they actually going to meet int he next chapter?
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! I'm excited to write them crossing paths, and I promise it'll happen very very soon. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: February 06, 2010 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Ooh! I LOVE this little twist! It didn't occur to me that you'd have Emma TAKE Pam with her! I sense good things coming in the next few chapters. ;-)
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying! Oh yes..good and new things will be happening. Thanks for your review, it means a lot!
Date: February 06, 2010 09:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Loved the sleepover scene it just felt so real. Girl of Claire's age don't think, and you can totally imagine her friend saying what she did and not thinking about the repercussions of it, you know? Jim handled that situation really well too, especially as we know he’s still hurting and grieving himself.
Can’t wait to see what you have planned next!
Author's Response: Thanks love! Glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for all your help! ♥