Date: February 28, 2010 12:31 am Title: Chapter 8
Yikes! I can't wait to see how you continue this! JHalpert, I think you're a master at cliffhanger endings - yet nice job!
Author's Response: thanks dear! glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: February 27, 2010 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Loving this. It's great to see the combined obstacles of so much time combined with Claire and Jim's mourning. There's definitely no simple way about things here and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: :) thank you so much! I appreciate the reviews so much :)
Date: February 27, 2010 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
The tension in this chap was palpable, Jenn. When Pam asked about Sarah, I felt so badly for Jim and Claire.
*Pam laughed, mesmerized by his composure and fluidity with his words. She was waiting for a slip up, some reminisce of the Jim she once knew.* I found those sentences intriguing. The description made me wish that this was illustrated :)
Now I'm hoping to be a fly on the wall if Jim and Claire talk about Pam and Jim's history with her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much NanReg! :) I'm glad that you liked the chapter, it's very difficult to write tension, so I'm glad that it worked. :)
Date: February 27, 2010 11:39 am Title: Chapter 8
Sooo intense
Author's Response: :) glad you're enjoying!