im glad the last one wasnt the ending =, also "bp" jaja i love that, its like he's talking about an era, a really angsty but romatic era.i learn a new frase too "the post-coital bliss" lol that sounds good!!
about the review thing u can use the word "comentario" or i think the oficial word is "reseƱa" but that one is to formal. and one more thing, now that we're helping each other, i notice in most of your comments to me, u use the word "para" when the right one is "por" i thing it must be confising for u cuz they're both "for" in english, try to use "para" when its more like when u do something with a purpose(i do this "para" something)
anyway i hope this help u and also u are totally welcome to correct me too.
lol i talked a lot =/. now im going to read the next chapter *sigt*... this is bliss!!
see u

Author's Response: Siempre tengo problemas entre 'por' y 'para'. Es muy dificil. Pero muchas gracias por ayudame! Oh, tu ingles es muy bueno con solamente algunos errores (minor spelling). Estoy muy feliz que le gusta "bp" porque pienso que antes Jim estaba con Pam, era un tiempo muy diferente tan cuando el estaba con ella, conoces? Gracias por el comentario :D

Beautiful work, tying the story to the lyrics. Nice, soft comedic touch with the last vignette.

Author's Response: I love these songs a lot and love Jim and Pam just as much so it was natural to combine the two. The bonus is having readers like you who enjoyed it as well :o)

:) love it! Another wonderful chapter..love the musical component

Author's Response: Thank you so much, JHalpert! It's so great to know that you're enjoying this story and the music part of it since it's what inspired to write this in the first place.