1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2021 07:32 pm Title: Epilogue
I love this beautiful story. You did such a wonderful job capturing Pam's worries. I thought they were both well characterized.
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2011 09:06 am Title: Epilogue
I've now read this epilogue for the third time, and I still have that teary eyed smile. I adore this whole thing, and it's a long sigh of relief from the first angsty chapter. I love the image you've painted of Jim as a father, spending time with his daughters and watching sports with them, painting their nails and what not. It's so like Jim to do that with his kids. At least I think so anyway. The part that gets me every time I read this is the part about the high blood pressure and how she'd get upset anytime she thought about him not being around anymore because of it. I also love that you gave them two daughters. I thought they would do that on the show, because I think them having two little girls is the cutest thing for some reason, so I'm glad you took that route. I adored this entire story from beginning to end, and it was such a pleasure working with you on it. You did the hard part, the writing it out. You're such a talented writer and I hope that you continue to share stories with us on a regular basis! :) Thanks for this gem.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for all the super nice comments throughout :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2011 06:59 am Title: Epilogue
::wild applause:: more_awake, I'm absolutely thrilled that you finished this wonderful story. Thank you! And thanks to your cheerleader, Danielle, too :D This was a lovely wrap-up, a satisfying and sweet conclusion, especially in view of all the delicious angst ;) I loved picturing these two little girls and their parents--so adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! :D I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate all your nice comments throughout :)
Date: December 05, 2011 10:06 pm Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed your story -- it's nice to know that in your world Jim and Pam are such caring parents -- and still crazy about each other. I like that.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'd like to think that they would be in the future... if they actually existed. hehe
Date: December 05, 2011 05:15 pm Title: Epilogue
You have killed me with utter awesomeness. I was so worried you weren't going to finish this, and you did and you did it amazingly. I love how you gave them another little girl.
Thanks for finishing xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much-- especially for saying such nice things throughout. I really, really appreciate it :)