1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2021 10:13 am Title: crash into me.
Um. Double ouch?
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2010 06:28 pm Title: crash into me.
I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. Love the flashbacks, it works so well.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 08:11 am Title: crash into me.
For some reason my first review of this chapter didn't show up completely. Hmmph! Anyways ultimately what I was trying to say is the last part, where he's imagining what it would be like to have dinner at home with Pam is perfect, and I could see that happening to him in both Scranton and Stamford. Good stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That means a lot! :-)
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2010 07:18 am Title: crash into me.
Please, please continue with this story! It always worries me when an author says they don't know where they're going with a story, since they might not finish. I'm enjoying this very much :)
It's a little thing, but my favorite parts are the tag lines and how the problem at the end of the chapter flow with what was written. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's just a very random story haha :)
Date: July 13, 2010 06:25 am Title: crash into me.
This is beautiful, keep it coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 11:16 pm Title: crash into me.
I'm really interested to see where this is going. I felt like I was there with Jim in some of these scenes.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 08:56 pm Title: crash into me.
This is so good, oneleaf! I reread the last chapter and the rose still makes me swoon. (Too bad JKras is married now. Darn.) Anyways, this is just lovely and heart wrenching at the same time. Keep going!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. IKR? *sigh*