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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2010 06:00 am Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

You handled this inevitable situation in just the right way IMHO.  Jim's response to CeCe's plight was perfectly in character.  Clever of you to have Pam working late.  Great job, ivy!

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2010 09:40 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

The way you write Jim as a father seems so in character to the way he would deal with this situation. She's a lucky girl to have him as a daddy.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2010 02:13 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

I'm really enjoying this, ivy! I think you're doing a fine job of creating both a believable relationship and handling Cece's maturing. I think you can continue till she's about 35!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2010 06:52 am Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

You handled Jim perfectly, He reacted just as I thought he would. Like you said, he's a sensitive guy, but he isn't OVERLY sensitive where he needs his man card removed lol. You're also writing Cece BRILLIANTLY!!! Poor thing, this is definitely not the thing you want to talk to Dad about lol

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2010 06:23 am Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

lol aww he was perfect!! I was alone with my dad too when I got mine, this was just..perfect :)

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2010 11:55 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

jajajajjaaj this was really fun to read! im all gigglely.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2010 10:14 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

that was perfect! my dad used to have to go out and buy tampons for me, my sister, and our mom. poor guy.

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2010 10:02 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

I definitely think this was in-character. I must've missed something somewhere, though, because I couldn't figure out why Pam was working at a high school! At first, I thought maybe that was Cecelia's school, but a 12 year old would be in middle school, so that's not it... Was it in another chapter and I just totally missed it?

Author's Response: Yeah, I think it was the...age 9 chapter, there's a bit of history that says after Dunder Mifflin shuts down, Jim became sales director at another office supplies company (Jay's Business Systems, actually a Scranton company) and Pam became sophomore guidance counselor at a high school.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2010 09:51 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 12

I really liked this chapter. Nice response for Cece's needs here! Very cute, keep going!

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