1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2018 09:14 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
Absolutely one of the best stories on this site. Wow!
Date: July 06, 2010 09:53 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
This whole thing was really fun to read, and the last chapter hit just a little too close to home. We took my older son to college last August, and you definitely got the scene right.
10 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2010 07:21 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
Aw, I can't believe this is over! I read this chapter twice, it's so touching and poignant and rounds out the story so well. And it left me with a lump in my throat. I loved this entire thing, as you know, and this is such a sweet sweet ending. I really thought it was so "Jim" to not want to leave right away, and I love that you threw in the "don't get arrested/STD's/ etc. instead of going with the 'I love you' stuff. It made it more real the way you did it. Can't wait to read more of your stories soon!
Date: July 06, 2010 02:52 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
I loved it all! I'm looking forward to whatever you come up with next.
10 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2010 01:58 pm Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
*Wears black* I'M SO SAD THIS IS OVER :(
You rounded this story ip SO beaitifully omg!
I adore the way Jim just couldn't let go of his baby aw!!
Adding to favourites!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2010 06:34 am Title: Cecelia Halpert, Age 18
This has me feeling very sentimental, ivy. Perfect way to end this lovely story. Each chapter has a pitch perfect tone, and, as I'm sure I've mentioned before (probably more than once actually), a great balance of father/daughter realism and humor. Great, great job.