7 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2011 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it so far. I'll be honest, I cant imagine Pam ever being so bitchy tho...I'm sure she'd be pretty happy to see Jim again regardless of whats happened. Dont really get why she's so upset with him, would be good to find out!
Author's Response: Hi noodles (awesome name btw) thanks for that. I thought I made it somewhat clear why she's mad at him. But I'll try to clear things up in the next chapter. Sorry you thought she was bitchy I thought I was able to tone it down to being just distant and unwilling to let him back in because he keeps leaving. Sorry that message didn't come across here. I'll keep this a shorter story than I initially planned since it's not coming out the way it should. Thanks for the heads up. I'll wrap it with one more chapter. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2011 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooooooooooooh I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.The situation with Jack is realy interesting, andI really thought you handled how she behaved around Jim brillintly.
"Jim play..." awww let the man, it will make you fall in love with him Pam :(
UPDATE SOOOOOOON
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah Halpert! I tried to come up with a unique situation that may not have been done before for Jim and Pam to deal with. I'm glad that you thought I handled it all well, I had written 4 versions of this chapter so I'm happy to know you enjoyed it! I am writing the third chapter as we speak, so more on the way soon!
9 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2011 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am so in love with this story. It has just the right mix of angst and hope. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you BluetimesTwo! I had such a hard time finding that balance of angst and hope so I'm glad it came out well. I'd written four different versions of this chapter, so I'm happy to know you enjoyed this. More on the way soon!