Reviews For Back-up Plan
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2022 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this one a lot. Feels very in line with canon, both in the humor and in the sweetness of it all. Seeing Jim's reaction to this moment is a great addition to their story.

Reviewer: aurora Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2011 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cute story. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU for dropping a note, I'm glad you thought it was cute :)

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2011 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cute rendition of a backstory I don't think has been told here at all. My favorite line:

"he had sworn to Pam that he wouldn’t complain this time if he heard some of her wedding planning during work hours"

Author's Response: "Cute" was what I was aiming for, so yay! I'm glad you liked that line, I really had fun writing it and thinking about it :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2011 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet, a_dork_like_that.  Thanks for starting my work day with a smile :)

Author's Response: And thanks for ending my work day with a smile :) I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review, and sorry for being so late in answering!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2011 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute indeed. I've never read a fic about that youtube video, so that ws really fun,and Jim telling Pam he'd not complain about her organising her wedding at work this time was very sweet :)

Author's Response: I thought that this archive needed a "I bought the boat tickets the day I saw that Youtube video" story ^^ And of course Jim wouldn't dare to complain! And he could hear them even more, given the closeness of their desks :D Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2011 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so cute! I'm sitting here grinning so much my coworkers probably think I've lost it. This is adorable, and I've actually never read a story about the Youtube video and the subsequent boat ticket purchase. My favorite part of this was how Jim's brothers and sister mock him for being excited for his wedding, and the part about him telling Pam he wouldn't complain about her wedding plans this time. I really enjoyed this so much!

Author's Response: Sorry that your coworkers think that JAM broke your brain :D We don't know much about Jim's brothers and sister, but I always assumed that since he's a born pranker, his siblings must be something too! Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed this :)

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2011 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

The two parts I love the most:

Thinking about his wedding had always been easy, but just thinking about him being married to Pam (his fiance Pam. His fiance Pam, who was carrying his child. Their child. Oh God) always left him a little dizzy

And this just makes me snort:
And suddenly, he didn’t mind being a big walking cliché, being made fun of by his brothers for writing his vows six months before the actual ceremony, being teased by his sister that of course he should be excited, because “every little girl is excited about her wedding day, Jim, you can’t be the exception!”

Cute, and like I said, it's always fun to get a story on a subject that hasn't been tackled yet. At least, I can't think of any that cover this one. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad I'm the first one to revisit that magic day of thinking about a back-up plan for the wedding :) Thanks again for your patience and your help!!

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