10 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2011 04:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I was hoping that Jim would get to ask her out, but I guess you're not going to make this easy on us lol I like this a lot and I'm looking forward to your version of the Dundies now that Pam's broken up with Roy. I really can feel the tension from Jim as I'm reading. I like that you're able to still keep a good level of angst even though Roy and Pam aren't together, you still have Pam fighting against herself and trying to move on from that oaf. Anyways, hope you have more for us soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Next chapter should be up shortly!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2011 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw. Poor Jim and Pam! Keep going, K love the tension! And definitely the fact that Pam's not with Roy (and doesn't want to be!) How did I miss the first two chapters? I really liked this! Keep it up!
P.S. My only complaint is how short the chapter was!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Apparently, I enjoy writing tension, who knew! I know this chapter was short, but it felt like it was a good spot to end it and I didn't want to try to add more and have it just be filler.
Date: May 22, 2011 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, old Pam's sure not making this easy for Jim, is she? Interesting premise. I'll be hanging in to see what you do with this!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review! It means a lot!