Date: June 11, 2011 12:00 pm Title: Where to begin?
Great job bringing in both sides of Pam considering that strong alternative drug. The thought of Jim losing the baby or Pam is a tough one. I understand the "Mom" in Pam though doing anything to protect her child. Great job!
Date: June 10, 2011 07:44 pm Title: Where to begin?
Mosy definitely still interested in this fic. Cece is adorable, and I can see why Pam wanted her to come visit. Thanks for writing something so awesome. Now, get back to work ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2011 01:14 pm Title: Where to begin?
Wow, that was definitely a close call! I love your battle ax reference, it made me chuckle a bit. I love and adore your Cece so much, she's the sweetest kid and loves her momma so much. I really can feel Jim's nervousness jumping up off the page at me, and I'm really very much looking forward to the rest of this story. You have Jim's voice so spot on. *high five*
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2011 09:04 pm Title: Where to begin?
I really can feel the agony in this chapter for Jim. I felt so sad, he is so worried about his wife, his not-quite-ready-to-be-born son, and small daughter. You wrote his pain beautifully!
But... Please pinky swear me a happy ending.
Please?
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2011 04:47 pm Title: Where to begin?
Very emotional chapter for Jim and Pam. This part really got me: “I haven’t even met him and he already has such a big part of my heart.”
“Pam, he is ours.” My Ben. My boy. My son. You can really feel how afraid they are and how much they love their kids. And then at the end when they learn that the contractions have stopped? Their reaction had me smiling. Beautiful :) Looking forward to seeing what happens next.