Date: June 25, 2011 10:13 pm Title: First visists and Sisterly love
Such a sweet chapter. My favorite part was the little note about/to Pam at the beginning-- I'm a total sucker for stuff like that. But I also really loved the descriptions of everyone's little moments with the newest Halpert, and the way you write Cece continues to be completely adorable. Looking forward to seeing how everything progresses with them as a family. Really, really nice job :)
Date: June 25, 2011 08:26 pm Title: First visists and Sisterly love
I'm finally catching up on reviews. So happy to see this one. I'm happy Ben is doing well and great job with Cece's reactions. I'm so glad we get more.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2011 05:44 pm Title: First visists and Sisterly love
Hi1 *waves* still with you! Wow, first, the image of Jim's ring fitting around his son's wrist? That gave me chills. I love the how insistent Pam was about seeing her son, that would be me, no doubt. I adore your Cece so so much. There's something about these chapters that feels so personal, like I know Jim on this whole other level. I love it. Love it love it and can't wait for more. So, in short, I'm so still with you!
Date: June 24, 2011 12:11 pm Title: First visists and Sisterly love
Still with you! This story is amazing and so unbelievably touching, Dedeen. The comparison of Ben's hand and Jim's wedding ring was a visual that's just beyond words.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2011 08:52 am Title: First visists and Sisterly love
Eeeeeeeee very much still with you. I look forward to this story so much, so I'm always excited when I see you have updated. It's beautiful reading Jim's words, and seeing everything from his perspective. Ben seems adorable, and the partwith the wedding band made me go all mushy and gooey :) Keep it up, I'm including this in my fanfic recs on tumblr today :)