Date: June 14, 2011 07:19 am Title: Chapter 2
She is almost afraid to talk for fear that she will burst out into tears, so instead she just nods and whispers “me too”, dropping her purse on the ground and wrapping her arms around him. “I’m sorry,” he whispers, “I’m so sorry”. Guh. That's just...it hits me right in the heart.
This is perfection: When he looks at her she’s smiling and she looks giddy, she looks in love, it nearly makes his heart stop she is so beautiful. “God me too. You have no idea.” “Come inside. Please. Don’t leave.” She punctuates the question with a pointed look, her meaning clearly not lost on him...“Come with me.” Seriously perfect, achingly romantic, just enough. Beautiful job. I am just loving these new relationship fics <3
Author's Response: I love your reviews, I love hearing about things that readers enjoyed, I love that something I write can strike a chord with someone, your reviews make me want to keep writing and writing, so be careful ;) Thank you, as always, Nan!
Date: June 12, 2011 11:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Love.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you miss hoo!! Thanks for reading ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2011 08:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww very cute :) I love me some early JAM!
Author's Response: Thank you - and me too - I love this time of their relationship - so many things we don't know, so many possibilities, I love that we can fill it all in with fanfic ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2011 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
There is something so sweetly poignant about your writing. You do a fantastic job of surrounding the reader in the emotions Jim and Pam are feeling.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jinx! What a great compliment! I think their story is so rich with emotion I just love exploring nearly every phase of their relationship. Thanks for reading & reviewing :)