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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2012 02:43 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby

So freaking cute, I have no words. Please continue these :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I've got a few ideas, so I hope to continue.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2012 09:44 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby

I love it. The picture of the growing family headed home. And I so think that car rides give us some of the best moments available with the people we love. So your story is really a favorite of mine... I look forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I thought the same thing about car rides. I've got a few more ideas. Hopefully I can finish one soonish.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2012 07:46 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby

I absolutely love and adore this, and love what you did at the end! It's perfect! My favorite parts are the how Jim hummed and with the baby against his chest and the baby calmed own and realized he was his daddy, and the part that describes how people think he should feel something extra special because he had a boy, yet all Jim cares about is that he has another child, boy or girl. It just seems very Jim like. The love between him and Pam just jumps off the page, and I love their giddiness. Also the ending paragraph was such a wonderful image. I adored this entire story. I'm so looking forward to more of these! You've got a gift of drawing such a beautiful image. I'm adding this to favorites.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I was worried it might be too cheesy, so I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 04:07 pm Title: A Conversation Between Siblings

I love kids and their innocent little chit chat :)

Author's Response: Me too! I had the basic dialogue for a while, but I couldn't think of a setting. Then my mom told me a story about a conversation between me and my sister that she had heard while driving when we were very little: "Are there dinosaurs at the zoo?" "No! Dinosaurs are all stunk-up!" (I meant "extinct" haha)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 03:35 pm Title: A Conversation Between Siblings

So adorable, I remember the days my boys thought I was "The One". Such sweet memories.

Author's Response: Aw... cute! :) Whenever you mention your boys on the boards, they always sound like such good kids (I say "kids" even though I think at least one is around my age hehe). Thanks for the comment!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 11:22 am Title: A Conversation Between Siblings

So sweet :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 07:11 am Title: A Conversation Between Siblings

Awwww!!!! I love this! I'm still smiling after this line.


He doesn’t agree, but you can already tell that he is going to make some girl just as happy as his father makes you.


What a short and sweet little thing this is.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I really wanted to write a full story around this, but when all I could really see clearly was dialogue, I just decided to keep it short.

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