Date: May 14, 2020 05:18 am Title: Bringing Home Baby
What I love most about this: the gender neutral perspective Jim has about raising kids. I enjoyed this!
10 [Report This]Date: February 29, 2012 02:43 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby
So freaking cute, I have no words. Please continue these :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I've got a few ideas, so I hope to continue.
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2012 09:44 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby
I love it. The picture of the growing family headed home. And I so think that car rides give us some of the best moments available with the people we love. So your story is really a favorite of mine... I look forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I thought the same thing about car rides. I've got a few more ideas. Hopefully I can finish one soonish.
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2012 07:46 pm Title: Bringing Home Baby
I absolutely love and adore this, and love what you did at the end! It's perfect! My favorite parts are the how Jim hummed and with the baby against his chest and the baby calmed own and realized he was his daddy, and the part that describes how people think he should feel something extra special because he had a boy, yet all Jim cares about is that he has another child, boy or girl. It just seems very Jim like. The love between him and Pam just jumps off the page, and I love their giddiness. Also the ending paragraph was such a wonderful image. I adored this entire story. I'm so looking forward to more of these! You've got a gift of drawing such a beautiful image. I'm adding this to favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I was worried it might be too cheesy, so I'm really glad you liked it.